这篇英语作文平评分只有67分满分100分,我想问问有哪些地方需要改进的。

2024-12-01 00:38:49
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回答1:

序号为行数
第一段
1 anyone~everyone
第二段
3 wants~wanted
4-5 He strove for his dream persistently and it came true finally
6 Thus is can be seen~As can be seen
7 must be unstoppable~is unstoppable
8 Hence do the students~So are the students
11 persistent in dreams~persistent in pursuing our dreams
第三段 Like the saying~As the saying