求英语高手帮忙改错。好的加分在线等

2025-02-12 21:43:32

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回答1：

这样修改：
1.whatever team wins on saturday，it will go through to the national championships
首先明确whatever team 没错，错在句子的混乱，有点中式英语味道了，这是受汉语思维影响造成的。此处是让步状语从句，后部分是主句，主句要有自己的主语，因此添加主语it才对，全句相当于：No matter what team wins on saturday，it will go through to the national championships.
周六的比赛谁获胜，谁就晋级参加全国锦标赛。

2.the reason why they were always poor was that they paid little attention to education
the reason why ......+ be+ that(引导表语从句，千万不能用because,也是中式的。)
他们老是贫穷的根源在于他们很少关注教育。

3.it was after he got what he had desired that he realized it was not so important
强调句it was +被强调部分+that......，强调部分是after he got what he had desired ，因此用that.
他得到渴望得到的东西之后，才明白那东西没有那么重要。

4.it has been announced that candidates should remain in their seats until all the papers have been collected
will改为should，should用于“建议、命令、要求”等的从句中时表示义务或责任，意思是：应该，应当，必须，务必。还可以这样解释,在表示坚持、建议、命令、要求等的主语从句中，谓语用虚拟语气，should+动词原形：
在句型"It is suggested ( proposed, ordered，desired, requested、 announced 等)+ that .... "中，that 后面的从句中的谓语动词用： should + 动词原形。含有上面词汇的宾语从句、表语从句或含有同根名词的同位语从句，都有这一用法。
据布告，（考试结束时）考生务必待在原位，直到考卷被收集完毕。

5.the firm is too small to compete with large international companies
fire是不是打错了，是firm吗？compete with ..... 与....竞争
这公司太小，无法与大型的国际公司竞争。

6.because he was working hard，his dream was realized at last
realized是及物动词，“实现他的梦想”是：realized his dream,现在是宾语做了主语，当然要用被动语态，另外告诉你一点：come true中的come是不及物动词，没被动，只能说his dream came true，不能说his dream was came true,也不能说came true his dream。再有就是短语错了
，应该是at last“最后，最终”
因为他努力，梦想终于实现了。

回答2：

1.whatever( 改为whichever) team wins on saturday will go through to the national championships
2.the reason why they were always poor was whether(改为that) they paid little attention to education
3.it was after he got what he had desired when(改为that) he realized it was not so important
4.it has been announced that candidates will remain (前面一词改为这两词be remained)in their seats until all the papers have been collected
5.the fire is too small to compete on (改为with)large international companies
6.because he was working hard，his dream(加上was) realized in last

回答3：

你能把中文要表达的意思补充上吗

回答4：

1 whatever改为whichever
2 whether改为that
3 when 改为that
4 will改为should
5 on 改为 with
6 in 改为at

回答5：

1, whatever 改为whichever
2, whether 改为 because
3，When 改为 that
4，candidates 前加个 the
5，on 改为 with
6，realized 前加入 was ，in 改为 at