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四季就像一曲优美的圆舞曲,春天优美的舞曲,夏天是狂热的狂欢曲,秋天是一欢快的欢乐颂,而洞天是一支柔美的催眠曲……
绿意的春天,鲜花和歌声点缀。燕子穿着黑色的经典礼服站在屋檐上唱着春天的美好。此时,山上五光十色,粉粉的桃花姑娘在风中翩翩起舞,给春天添了一抹淡淡的粉色,黄黄的迎春花像天上的星星一样明亮,她摇着她那黄色脑袋,好像还没睡醒似的,她又为春姑娘戴上了黄色的花环。而现在,柳枝上抽出了一些鹅黄嫩绿的小芽,它们小心翼翼地探出它的小脑袋,仔细地打量这个美好的世界。
一眨眼,春天就过去了,取而代之的是烈日炎炎的夏天。蝉在树干上“吱吱”地叫着,好像在说:“热死了,热死了!”而看守我家大院的大黄狗则有气无力地瘫在地上,吐着他那红彤彤的大舌头,“呼呼”地喘着粗气。
可就是在这样炎热的夏天里,却能开出美丽的荷花。只见宛如一块无瑕的碧玉一般的池水上,立着一朵朵白里透红,红里透白的荷花,有的像一位亭亭玉立的少女,端坐在荷叶上,有的像一位女明星被荷叶团团围住,还有的像一个害羞的女孩子,躲在荷叶后面……真是赏心悦目。
金色的秋天,农民们非常繁忙。只见原来绿色的麦田,像是被金色渲染了似的,变成了一片金色海洋。一阵清凉的风吹过,麦子们纷纷弯了腰,像是在对农民伯伯的辛勤劳动表示敬佩呢。卖天边,有一株大枫树,他的树叶像是被红色的油漆泼过一般,叶子全被染红了,从远处看,真一片绚丽的晚霞。
树上飘下来一只只红蝴蝶,它们在空中跳着圆舞曲。而果园里却是一片繁忙的景象,苹果娃娃涨红了脸;石榴阿姨露出了她那亮晶晶的牙齿;枣子姑娘摇着她那铃铛般的脑袋,一阵风吹来,她们个个跳起了舞,仿佛真能听见悦耳的铃铛声呢。农民伯伯一会儿碰碰苹果娃娃的脸,一会摸摸石榴阿姨的头,忙得不亦乐乎。
冬天来了,白色的雪覆盖了树,屋顶和大地,仿佛给整人世界都披上了白色的大衣。看着仿佛进入到了一个神秘的仙境之中似的。此时,我闻到了一股股清香钻入了我的鼻孔,沁人心扉。
啊!原来是腊梅开了啊!黄黄的腊梅被雪覆盖了,但它的清香依然透过雪散发出来,不知道的人海以为雪也有香味儿呢。
冬天除了黄灿灿的腊梅,红艳艳的梅花,但还有白花花的梨花。白白梨花远的看仿佛与雪融化为一体了。近的看,好似雪给梨花披上了大衣。我们在草地上打雪仗,堆雪人,玩得不亦乐乎。
这就是美丽的四季,这就是优美的春天,炎热的夏天,美丽的秋天,神秘的冬天。
春天最美是早晨。大地复苏了,草从士里钻出来了,柳树爷爷仿佛换上了新的柳枝。仿佛又比以前年轻了许多,小草又换上了新的枝叶,仿佛又比以前更加美了。春风吹鼓了花苞露出洁白而美丽的花蕊,春天你儿们又重新回到往日的家园。鸟鸣牺牲大地之声合成了一首新的生命之歌。
The Four seasons
A year has four seasons.Every season has three months.The weather of one season is different from that of any other.The life cycles of plants are controlled by the seasons.
The first season is spring.The three months in it are March,April and May.That is my favouite season.During that time we have warm weather and fine days.All plants come to life.Animals wake up from hibernation.It is time for farmers to get ready for their fields.
The second season is summer.The three months are June,July and August.The weather is very hot and it often rains.People can go swimming and sightseeing.It is time for all things to grow up.
The third season is autumn.The three months are September,October and November.The weather becomes cooler and cooler.Leaves begin to fall to the ground.It is the harvest time for farmers.
The fourth season is winter.December,January and February are the three months of that season.The weather is very cold,and most of the plants die at that time.Sometimes it snows.People can enjoy skating and skiing.But winter doesn' t stay with us for a long time,for spring comes again soon.