英语自我介绍帮我看看怎么样有什么错误吗

2025-02-25 22:01:14

推荐回答（5个）

回答1：

觉得还好，不过because不可以是一句子的第一个词，把它跟上面那句连起来。而且是playing sports，不是doing sports。I have been learning it for 3 years.

I also worked in the student union before, so, i have the ability of organizing things neatly and correctly. I am a smart girl with kindness and responsibilty, and I am able to calmly deal with problems.

so i chose. 最后可能用reveal my dream，会好一点。

回答2：

“I am come from”有误，应是I am from或I come from
“I'm XX years old now.”这里now最好不要
“I have learned it for 3years”应是I have been learning it for 3years
“Germany certificate”应是 Certificate in German
”responsiblity“应是a sense of responsibility
trying my best to 应是 try to

回答3：

一般自我介绍是说ladies and gettlemen
for me to be interviewed here
I come from
the ability of organizing
improve my level of English and practice my oral English

回答4：

i am come from中去掉am
realize my dream是不是可以改为make my dream come true

回答5：

I come from 没有am

英语自我介绍 帮我看看怎么样 有什么错误吗

英语自我介绍帮我看看怎么样有什么错误吗