英语作文修改

英语作文修改怎么改。。。

2025-02-14 05:58:36

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回答1：

There is no doubt that we live in a scientific and technical aera, science and technology are changing our lives.

I think information technology and electricity are both the advancement of the technologies and they have the greatest impact on our lives. Information technology and electricity has changed our lives a lot, for example internet, mobile phone, wireless internet and so on, these things are necessary to us. As for electricity, it has an important effect on every aspect of life and industry. So, modern life can not leave information without them, because they have blended our life already,

Nearly everything needs information and electricity. They are bases on many technologies and play an important role in society development.

For one thing, they are very helpful to us. As for information technology, we can get information swiftly and linkly even more easily. Information technology also makes our life easier. As for electricity, it’s the cleanest and highest effective, handiest energy resource. Domestic electrical equipments have been proves well. The way of transmitting electricity is the most convenient, some electric wires and power stations can do that electricity is the easiest to save and preserve. However,information technology and electricity also have disadvantages. The development of information technology is at landed by the transmission of harmful information, the security of the information can’t get guarantee, physical crime are changed into mental crime, as for electricity, and improper using and curse personal, property damage. Sometimes it’s a huge damage, especially, static electricity will be bad to people's health and to equipment, in a way ,it can cause a fire.

Form my conclusion, with the increasing development of technology, people’s life has changed dramaticaly.

补充：

还有就是，作文中重复的太多。比如information technology and electricity

英语很忌讳重复，会让人方案，不易得高分。

最好多使用and和but等连接的句子，或使用个中从句。

还有就是你名词，形容词，副词有时混用，要注意。事态问题也应注意。

回答2：

stories set us thinking, wondering wha

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