请大家帮我看看语法对不对！ 谢谢了

why were you so quiet today?今天，但是是现在之前，表示过去时，quiet是形容词，要与be动词连用。
I will take it if you give it to me.accept一般指接受某种思想或准许入学之类的，用take表示接受即可。if跟条件语句，用一般现在时，不用加行使动词，即使要加也不是could过去时，可以用may。give it to me或者是give me the thing.
take it easy表示放轻松。occupy不合适，最好换成gain或者draw.
I have to leave in advance.提前是in advance。
这句用appear感觉不太好，可以改成come什么的。
appreciate拼错了。
I shall discuss the question with you.discuss sth. with sb.是固定搭配，为与某人商量某事。shall表示"我应该"与I连用，语气较委婉。
I felt he never consider me.feel的过去式是felt，为某人考虑可以用consider sb.
He is my companion.用colleague也可以。
I will confirm it right away.confirm是及物动词，不能单独使用。
You did better than I have expected it.我过去认为，用过去完成。
What will you intend to do?intend是动词。
I'm a junior in the office.名词前面加量词。
PS:楼下那位的语法更恐怖,不用看了

1不对。do后加动词原形，因该用are you so quiet
8arrange改成discuss
9feel的过去式是felt
10just in case万一……
11company改成colleague
12 l confirm immediately
13my改l
14intend改plan
补充：appreciare因是appreciate

1,Are you so why peaceful today?
2,If you are willing to give me I will accept with pleasure.
3,Puts with ease, if you want to attract he pays attention.
4,I can not but walk ahead of time.
5,He will appear.
6, I appreciate this picture very much!
7,I am arranging a conference.
8,This question I must discuss with you.
9,I thought that he ever did not consider for me.
10,在办案.
11,He is my colleague.
12,I confirmed immediately.
13,You make being friends with which expected compared to me.
14,What do you have to plan?
15,I am in the office the qualifications and records of service am shallowest.
应该是这样吧,我不能保证我都正确,但是大部分都应该没有问题吧