求一篇英语作文 《对体育的看法》

sports can cultivate students' sense of competition in modern society is a society full of competition, and competitive consciousness is closely with athletic sports, in sports, don't speak caste, cherish, In the competition, except individual does not exist any physical, psychological, inequality in physical exercise, in motion in the competition, give full play to their potential, reflect their strength. In the sports system BuXunSiQing; speak, The most realistic, regardless of qualifications, The most practical, think about vanity. This requires each participant will try to ought to compete directly, especially some intensity exercise projects, such as football, basketball, boxing, etc, thus gradually enhance the students' sense of competition and indomitable perseverance.
2 and helps to cultivate students' good social morals and the cooperation spirit in competitive sports, sports must abide by the rules, people can only be strict rules allowed in the efforts to create a situation, any violation of the rules will blame and punishment. Meanwhile, in a group project, everybody has his own role, each character has its special requirement, must depend on the behavior characters required, it is very helpful in the action of socialization, to cultivate law-abiding people's idea and behavior. Sports always follow the "equality of opportunity, and the basic principles of balance and strict rules and impartial judge can cultivate students' fair competition concepts. Through sports and exercise can also learn how to correct the mistakes and failures treat competition, strong will, strengthen resistance, make the students ability to defeat in the fierce social have tenacious vitality. Therefore, the student through participation in competitive sport, can cultivate good sportsmanship, and then develop good social morality. How is the organization of social groups, and contribute to public welfare undertakings, and how to improve social consciousness, and how to develop the power to others and feelings of the respect and understanding. Sport provides us with such a social life of learning and training opportunities and places.
3 and helps to cultivate good personal character sports help to train a person's optimism and self-confidence, dares to victory, competition, self, self reform of social life of good conduct indispensable, Through the sports can also develop leadership and obedience and fully display with good behavior. Experiments have proved: the students can have competition experience showed good personal accomplishment and social adaptability, showed higher leadership ability. For competitive sports to bear responsibility, decision, influence others in such fields as an important quality provides opportunities. On the other hand, sports and has some quality training to the trend, such as the respect and obey the rules, etc. Students from competitive sports can cultivate hatred or hostile shall accept criticism consciousness, no serious injury and beyond the prescribed, the opponent's actions. Competitive match sometimes need have self-discipline, or the self-sacrifice spirit, not only in the desire to win and must be established, the tolerance of psychological in open-minded. These are based on the character of a society is an important condition.

Sports and games do a lot of good to our health. They can make us strong, prevent us from getting too fat, and keep healthy and fit. Especially they can be of great value to people who work with their brains most of the day, for sports and games give people valuable practice in exercising the body.
What’s more, they make our life richer and more colourful. If we do not have a strong body, we will find it hard to do whatever we want. So persons of all ages enjoy watching and taking part in various kinds of sports-track and fields, swimming, skating, football, volleyball and basketball, etc.
Sports and games are also very useful in character training. They demand not only physical skills and strength but also courage, endurance, discipline and usually teamwork. For boys and girls, what is learned in the playground often has a deep effect on their character. If each of them learns to work for his team and not for himself on the football field, he will later find it natural to work for the good of his country instead of only for his own benefit. joozone.com
A healthy citizen makes a strong country. Let’s all take part in sports and games.

答案里好多grammar and sentence structure 的问题啊