雅思作文帮忙修改及评一下分谢谢！

2025-03-05 11:19:02

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回答1：

我觉得你写的挺好的，我看剑桥雅思书后面的范文都没有这么有条理，思路清晰，文笔流畅，我的作文不好，就只看出来你第四段第一句的“since the students are the further of...”里的further应该改成 future，（当然啦，可能是打错了）其他觉得都蛮好的，我觉得至少能得7.5分。

回答2：

第二段最后一句Personally,I strongly support this standpoint.可以去掉最后一个词Personally,I strongly support this.更简洁。
We can across the Pacific or Atlantic Oceans in an matter of hours which had to take several weeks in the past 改为 We can cross the Pacific or Atlantic Oceans in a few hours which cost us several weeks before.我只是本着简洁的原则，不要喷我哦。。。。。。。

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回答4：

Government should invest more in teaching science than other subjects because it could contribute to the country’s development and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Science has been developing rapidly during the past ten years. Since science has changed so much of today’s world, some people suggest that government should invest more in teaching science than other subjects.because Personally,I strongly support this standpoint.

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