原句翻译:During the time I worked part-time in the banquet department of Westin Hotel in Financial Street,I learned how to get on with others and tempered my will after I solved customers` questions,and because of these I got manager`s praise.
我认为“耐心的解决客人问题锻炼了意志”这句不好,不如换成“在耐心的解决客人问题的同时,获得了服务的乐趣,这让我更加投入其中”然后再接“获经理表扬”。
所以可把“ tempered my will after I solved coutomers` questions”换成“got the fun from servicing that made me pay more attendtion to it while I was solving customers` questions ”,后面再接“and because of these I got manager`s praise.”
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In Financial Street Wenstin hotel banquet part-time learned how to communicate with people, patient problem solving exercise will praise from manager
I ever took a part-time job in banquet Dpt. of Westin Hotel. During the period, I have learned how to communicate with others, solve clients' problems with pacience so as to steel my will and my ability improvements are appreciated by my manager.
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In theFinancial Street Wenstin hotel banquet part-time .I learned how to communicate with people, patient solving problem exercised myself.And got praise from manager
In the financial street westin hotel banquet department part-time learned how to communicate with people, patience, solve problems guest exercise will praise the manager