一篇介绍自己家的英语小短文。

My home is on the first floor. There are two bedrooms, a kitchen and a living room. I’m a child. I have a nice bedroom. In my bedroom, there is bedroom, a closet, an air- conditioner and so on. My closet is green. My bed is blue. I love my bedroom very much. 我的家就在它的第一层。有两间卧室,一间厨房和一间客厅。我是一个孩子。我有一个漂亮的卧室。在我的卧室里,有一个卧室,一个衣橱里,空气-调节器等。我的壁橱里,是绿色的。我的床是蓝色的。我非常喜欢我的卧室。

My house is very beautiful and big . lt has two floors
.there are a living room and a kitchen and a dining room in
the first fioor . my family often watch tv toghether in the
living . there are twobedrooms and a study room in the second fioor . l often play computer in the study room .
l love my house very much !

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My home is on the first floor. There are two bedrooms, a kitchen and a living room. I’m a child. I have a nice bedroom. In my bedroom, there is bedroom, a closet, an air- conditioner and so on. My closet is green. My bed is blue. I love my bedroom very much. 我的家就在它的第一层。有两间卧室,一间厨房和一间客厅。我是一个孩子。我有一个漂亮的卧室。在我的卧室里,有一个卧室,一个衣橱里,空气-调节器等。我的壁橱里,是绿色的。我的床是蓝色的。我非常喜欢我的卧室。
My house is very beautiful and big . lt has two floors
.there are a living room and a kitchen and a dining room in
the first fioor . my family often watch tv toghether in the
living . there are twobedrooms and a study room in the second fioor . l often play computer in the study room .
l love my house

第二个短文可以翻译一下吗？我觉的第二个不错，就是怕翻译错了。

WeIcome to my home…………………………