帮我修改一下这篇英语作文！

2025-02-08 00:04:12

推荐回答（6个）

回答1：

嗯，介个。。。错的地方还蛮多的耶。。。
嗯，还有你是准备给外国人看的还是给中国人看的，写的方法是不一样的。还有，你多大了？这是神马程度的作文？小学？初中？高中？还是大学的？我先改改语法，如果你想我帮你再改用词或者内容神马的，找我。
还有，我猜想你想说的是书写，而不是写作吧。。。那就不是writing，是handwriting.
nowadays, handwriting is very important. As a student, we always need handwriting. However, someone's is good, while others are just ordinary.

Some adults always say, handwriting tells a man. When you are reading, you can know the author is tall or short, fat or thin, or even bad temper or good temper, etc. Although I do not think what the adults said is totally right, some of their arguments are reasonable. Because I always have this feeling, if someone's writing is neat, the person, in fact, is very scrupulous and his temper is good. However, if he writes carelessly,(绝对不是casually), I may think he is lazy. (后面那句不要了，没意义。) But,(后面加上你觉得大人们说得不全对的原因。)

Therefore, (最后一句和前面的论点矛盾了，我先给你改语法，内容你需要我就给你改。) if you always pay attention to other's handwriting, you can know what the person is like. In other words, handwriting tells a man.

我不知道你学了英语多久，语法和内容都很有问题唉，多看看范文吧孩子~~
有问题找我。

回答2：

be动词后加形容词， importance改为important neatly改为neat
情态动词后加动词原形，wreting改为write
others后加is
If his writing is casual
感觉怪怪的，但只会该这些了。

回答3：

Nowadays, writing is very importance .As a student, we always need to write .but someone's writing is very neat and excellent. While others may not.i have ever heard some adults said that: As his writing is, so is he. They also said that when you observe someone’ writing. You can know wheather the people is tall or short, fat or thin ,bad-tempered or easygoing… Although I can’t think wheather what they said is right, at least some arguments are reasonable. Because I always see other’s writing, when I find someone’s writing is neat, the fact is that the people is very scrupulous and his temper is very good. If his writing casually. I can appreciate that he is lazy. If his letters are small , I think he is not tall(其实generous比较好）. So if you always notice other’s writing you can find the sentence :As his writing is , so is he, is right . 语法基本没错误了但读起来还是怪怪的我怕被我改掉愿意

回答4：

As his writing is, so is he
Nowadays, the writing is very important. As students, we always need writing. However, Some students' writing are very good but others are just so so.
I heard some adults said that," As his writing is, so is he." and they also said that, "when you notice someone’ writing. You can know the people is tall or short, fat or thin and bad temper or good temper… " Although I can’t think what they said are all right, at least some arguments are reasonable. I always notice other’s writing so that I know the authors' characteristics after read their articles. When I find someone’s writing is neatly, I know the author is very scrupulous and his temper is very good actually. If his writing casually, I know that he is lazy. If his writing small, I think may be he is not tall. So if you always notice other’s writing you can find the author is tall or short, fat or thin and bad temper or good temper. Just like the sentence said." his writing is , so is he is right."
改好了，没什么错误了；还加了一些话，好通顺句子。

回答5：

首先题目就已经表达不清了哦，你想说字如其人么？Handwriting tells a man
Nowadays, the writing is very importance .As a student, writing plays an important role in our study,but few students' writing is very good.
I have heard some adult said that:Handwriting tells a man. They also said that when you notice someone’ writing,you can tell whether the person is tall or short, fat or thin… I find it reasonable in some way. I always notice people’s writing. When I discover someone’s writing neatly, it can always tell that he is very scrupulous or his temper is very good. If his writing casually. What I can know is that he maybe lazy. If the charaters he writes are small , I think he maybe not tall. In a word, as if you always notice people’s writing, you can testify the opinion that handwriting tells a man.
我改得那么辛苦加点分吧～～！！！～有什么不明白再PM我

回答6：

As his writing is, so is he
Nowadays, the writing is very importance .As a student, we always need writing .but some people’ s writing is very good. While others just so so.
I have ever heard some adult said that: As his writing is, so is he. They also said that when you notice someone’ writing. You can know the people is tall or short, fat or thin and bad temper or good temper… Although I can’t think what they said is all right, at least some argument is reasonable. Because I always notice other’s writing, when I find someone’s writing is neatly, the fact is that the people is very scrupulous and his temper is very good. If his writing casually. I can know，I can know he is lazy. If his writing small , I think he is not tall. So if you always notice other’s writing you can find the sentence :As his writing is , so is he, is right .

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