个人觉得语法有问题，问题主要在is numerous students would like to pursue their studies.，从句缺少一部分，正确的应该是is a university where numerous students would like to pursue their studies，
缺少先行词及从句引导词，要不在is 后面加上a place in which.当然方法有多种，仅供参考。还有，楼主能写出这样的句子，水平必定不算太低，难道是不够自信么，？
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