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2025-01-21 17:52:36

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6 All the new buildings in cities and towns should be built in the traditional style. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Countless buildings are built in modern society with the/a significant progress of architecture. A host of traditional buildings are razed focally/with force ?? by government. Some people maintain that modern buildings should be constructed in style like those demolished buildings. (While new buildings replace old buildings. )??I oppose this point of view.

7 The production and transportation of food has been greatly changed by modern technology. To what extent do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Today, food industry has /been totally transformed by technological innovations. Mass production and flexible transportation depend on those new technolog/ies. I hold the opinion that it has both advantages and disadvantages in these/this process.

8 The government should stop putting money in self-defense and use the money to improve public facilities and help the poor people instead. Do you agree or disagree?

Crimes /rates are take up frequently/soaring recently. (Criminals search holes/leaks of public facilities in order to commit crimes for profits.)/chinglish Some people think government should not spending/spend heavily on self-defense but /should focus on facilities which are not improved/underdeveloped and /help those people who live in poverty. I agree with this point of view.

有很大进步，但用大词一定要有十足把握再用，多看看这个词在字典上是怎么用的，多准备些常用的形容词和副词，了解清楚其具体用法，在不同场合下都可以用，还是要注意小细节啊。

回答2：

a lot od mispelling,please correct it,otherwise you lose marks for it

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