网上的范文一般都写的不好,还是找专门写这类留学文书的机构。看克莱伍提供的范文就很挫啦。只看了前面几句话,就满是错误,i.e. 1.称呼 Dear director,你如何得知看推荐信的人是diretor呢。不要拍马不成,反被马踢了。还是老老实实用Dear Admissions Officer, Dear Selection Committee,甚至Dear Sir or Madam 都要好些。还有记住每个单词首字母要大写。2.This is to recommend...这句话太careless,至少加上 this letter is to recommend. 类似的开头还有 this letter serves as a recommendation for。。。/i am writing this reference letter to recommend/ it is a great pleasure to recommend/ i deem it a pleasure to recommend.
3. I have acquainted with...这句话想用一个比较典雅些的词acquaint却不知道它的用法,结果只会是贻笑大方。正确的用法应该是I was/got acquainted with...。另外,acquaint 是个短暂动作词,根本不能说自从2000年来一直不断地acquaint,所以这里不应该用since 2000,而应该用in 2000。就只看两句就看不下去了。。。
推荐信是整个留学文书中的重要组成部分,录取委员会委员通常审阅申请人的材料时,都是整套材料一块审阅的(ps,rl,cv,etc)。一篇写得好的推荐信绝对会为你加分,反之则可能影响你的申请,所以还是需要慎重对待。本人一直从事留学文书方面的工作,有事Q我,1422573382
英文入学推荐信模板
Dear director,
This is to recommend Ms Lin for admission to the John F.Graduate School of Business of Duquesne University. I have acquainted with Ms Lin since 2000,when she entered Hunan Industry Polytechnic, school of Business and Economy. Her academic record over the past 5 years has shown her to be one of our brightest students. What’s more, until now she was the first and the only student who has got her bachelor’s degree in less than 3 years via self-study examination which is very challenging and difficult.
In addition, Ms Lin is a student with very agreeable personality so that she gets on well with people. As my teaching assistant during the 5 years of schooling, She showed great potentials and capabilities in organization and leadership. For example, in summer of 2000.she organized a series of practical activities such as marketing research on the operation mode of A-Best supermarket which is one of the best supermarkets in China and accounting internship under professor Sha in 2003.Besides,her spoken English is better than that of the average students in our department .In addition to Being the English-Chinese translator in our department and teaching assistant of the foreign teacher Mr Trail. she had been the English host in a great number of Chinese –Australian Culture –exchange activities with remarkable humor and flexibility.
I was completely shocked by her overwhelming perseverance and fighting spirit which were clearly demonstrated in the sport program ”women’s 5000-metre Running ”in National University Sports Meeting. Ms Lin won the great honor for our school with Silver Medal and Golden Medal respectively in 2002 and 2003.With this striking personality, I am very happy and confident to recommend her to get a further study in the area of accounting because I believe she could do well in whatever she was determined to do with interest .If you have any further questions about Ms Lin ,please let me know and I will try to supply whatever information you need.
Yours sincerely,
ShiPing Lei,
Professor of economy
自己弄费得时间长些,网上有格式的!
要么就是找留学中介做,省时间,不过就是要付出些费用
看你的个人实际情况来选择了哈