写作思路及要点:以my perfect holiday为题,围绕假期的趣事展开描写,接着表达自己的想法以及观点。
正文:
It was the second day of our summer holiday. I felt good. I felt I am free. I had a lot of time to do things I like.
这是我们暑假的第二天。我感觉很好。我觉得我是自由的。我有很多时间做我喜欢的事情。
My parents are in Zhongshan. So I live alone but I don't feel lonely. But I didn't do something special. I stayed at home and watched TV. Oh! I wrote an Englishdaily composition. It was my homework.
我的父母在中山。所以我独自生活,但我不感到孤独。但我拿祥没有做一些特别宽敏袭的事情。我呆在家里慎兄看电视。哦!我写了一篇英语作文。这是我的家庭作业。
Today, I have slept for 14 hours.I thought I was very tired. It was time for dinner. I must go! I am very hungry.
今天,我睡了14个小时,我觉得我很累了。是吃晚饭的时间了。我必须去!我很饿。
today it is really a good day,my mother and i went to park this morning,there were much people in the park.someone palying basket ,someone walking along the river,someone reading english loudly,i am so happy to play in the park.今天过的真不错,我和妈妈早晨去公园了,很租做银多人都在公园里,有打篮球的,有散步的,胡拦还有大声朗读英语的,今天在公园玩的真弊宴高兴!