英语高手帮忙看一下有没有语法错误

2025-02-11 21:49:38

推荐回答（5个）

回答1：

【修改建议】

1、I am an Administrative at the currentcompany.

　　※Administrative是形容词，用名词短语 administration staff 为妥。

2、My major job is assisting therecruiting work of HR, including but not limited to employee registration,resignation, filing management, training scheduling, etc.

　　※assist 指协助某人做某事，应该用 assistingHR to recruit（协助人力资源部招工）
　　※including部分去掉前面的逗号改为besides taking charge of employees’ signing-in and resignation, filemanagement, training scheduling, etc（除了负责员工签到和辞职、文件管理、培训日程安排等工作外）

3、I am also in charge of thesupporting function including procuring and distributing stationery, printingname cards, order water, copying, posting, etc.

　　※supportingfunction常用作数学专业术语“支撑函数”，改为subsidiary odd jobs（辅助性的杂务工作）
　　※order water不知指的是什么，不敢擅改。不过，与其他并列的动名词不匹配，建议删除。

4、At the same time, I also take careof the registration, organization and filing of all kinds of files, collectingfinancial data, invoice management and release.

　　take care of 后的并列部分有的是名词，有的是动名词，最好统一为registering,organizing, filing off all kinds of files, collecting financial data, managing invoicesand release.
　　filing of改为filing off（把…归档）

【修改后的全文】

　　I am an (administration staff) at the currentcompany. My major job is (assisting HR to recruit) (besides taking charge of employees’signing-in and resignation, file management), training scheduling, etc. I amalso in charge of the (subsidiary odd jobs,) including procuring and distributing stationery, printingname cards, copying, posting, etc. At the same time, I also take care of (registering,organizing, filing off all kinds of files, collecting financial data, managing invoicesand releasing).

回答2：

Administrative是形容词，应该是Administrative Assistant行政助理
currrent company 之间要有空格键
recruiting work应该是recruitment
trainingscheduling 应该是training schedule
tare crae of 应该是take care of

回答3：

不知道对不对啊，，借鉴一下吧~~呵呵
第一行at改from，
in cluding后面不能跟but
就这么多吧。。。我该去补课了

回答4：

赶紧采取张达人的啊，你遇到贵人了，肯定是位资深的老师

回答5：

第一行at改from，in cluding后面不能跟but

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